Thursday, December 17, 2009

Sad poems part 1

WARNING: Yes, they are sad poems. I don't always feel this way and I'm fine. Dont worry about me, I just want an opinion or two on the quality. thank you!

I try writing happy poems, but they all suck. So here are my really super sad poems. Some of them are really old, some are new. I'm going in order from the ones I like the most to my least liked. If I hate them, they aren't going here.

1)
scratch & scribble,
down the words go,
somewhere to put the anger,
because I can't let it show.

2)
the memories, the fear,
the pain to bear,
all for me to know,
the tears try not to show,
collecting up in my eyes,
counting all the lies,
all the times that weren't real.

3)
emotions, feelings,
written down,
the world can see,
no smile, no frown.

4)
P eople oriented
A nger beyond reason
I nner feelings with no meaning
N owhere to run to

5) {iffy on this one}
the hole in her heart aches,
the tears in her eyes burn,
her knuckles white like the sink,
the anger deep in her stomach,
the boy who broke her heart,
will love no longer.

6)
beauty, pleasing to the heart,
helps it heal,
put together what fell apart.

Soooo that's what I have so far, that's complete, of course. I'm still working on a few that I think will be better. I'm sorry that they are all sad but, you know, it's still good poetry.....or at least I hope. lol :) hope you enjoyed! thanks for reading.

♥Kay♥

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